My Fathers Comb
by Michael Waters
When my mother insisted
That I take something,
His 5 aluminum Life-Time
Already outlined my back pocket
The comb Id watched him ply
How many thousand mornings
To rake his hair straight back
While I waited my turn
Before the bathroom mirror.
I wielded a 39瞽 Ace hard rubber
With a dab of Brylcreem
To slick my mop before school,
But for years now Ive run his comb,
As he did, under the cold-water tap,
Then dragged across my scalp
Only the shorter tines
Of the guillotine-shaped
Tool of vanity & work ethic.
Please take something, shed said,
My father three days dead, but
Id already nabbed the one object
I knew Id touch each day
In such casual ritual
To comb the grief away.
Writing My Fathers Comb was a more formal ritual than the one described in the poem. The staggered lines in each tercet may suggest the diminishing length of tines along the guillotine-shaped comb. My father died thirty years ago. The plaque above his cremains in the veterans cemetery in Florida reads He was a good guy. I still use his comb on my thinning hair.
has published thirteen books of poetry, most recently Caw, The Dean of Discipline, and Celestial Joyride. His next book, Sinnerman (Etruscan Press), will appear in 2023. He has co-edited several anthologies, including Border Lines: Poems of Migration, Reel Verse: Poems About the Movies, Contemporary American Poetry, and Perfect in Their Art: Poems on Boxing from Homer to Ali. His poems have appeared in POETRY, The American Poetry Review, The Paris Review, The Yale Review, Kenyon Review, and Rolling Stone. He is the recipient of five Pushcart Prizes and fellowships from the Guggenheim Foundation, National Endowment for the Arts, Fulbright Foundation, and New Jersey State Council on the Arts. Waters lives without a cell phone in Ocean, New Jersey.